He turns his back to me, a smooth lake of milk, quivering in the moon light. The curtains move in the warm breeze and cast shadows across him, inky blue and fleeting. In my hand I hold an instrument of torture and I mean to hurt him, I do, as he’s begged me to, this man whom I love. I mean to make him break and buckle for me.
The first lash comes quick and hot, I’m itching to see him recoil, hear him suck air through his teeth. He won’t cry out, not yet, not before he’s a galaxy of tiny red stars from shoulders to thighs. The leather strands are sharp tonight, cutting the silence of the room and his hips press harder into the bed as he resists. Again, a third, the quick whizz-smack and I can see the shadow of blood beneath the surface of his skin, a rising tide pulled by the crescent moon carved in my palm.

Oh, Miss. This is beautiful.
The language in this is just gorgeous. Poetic in its description
Thank you! I often feel I’m on the verge of, or wading into, purple prose.
This is absolutely gorgeous! I think my favorite lines are “We thrust and parry, dancing in the dark, an eternal call and answer. Swirling and spiralling through dreamscapes of pleasure I finally fall to his side, fingers and lips soothing the blooming nebulous bruises across his strong, lithe body.” But really, I love it all!
❤️ thank you so much
This is beautiful. The language is so visual I felt like it was painting a picture for me
Mollyx
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Such wonderful luscious use of language! So rich and evocative. Love it ?
Striking image!!! XOXO